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Becalming |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Becalming The faintest of rain drops, becalming crystal orb -- so frail, yet seductive. My eyes hold you in a place where time stands without breath, where life has no other need. In the stillness, I relive your descent. My lungs expanding in the search for language befitting your worth. Yet, all I can do is collapse my thoughts -- listening as your warmth runs long against my spine. Robert Joseph ~enb~ |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh yes!! Wonderfully original look...beautifully written! |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This piece certainly fits the title, which drew me right in, and all I can say is "thank you"... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, sensually lovely! One of your best Robert Joseph! Great to see you again...uh, your poetry. Well done! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
RJ~ Just breathing in the uniqueness of your thoughts - 'Yet, all I can do is collapse my thoughts -- listening as your warmth runs long against my spine.' Lovely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Robert, how can one work be so soothing and yet sensual, from your pen, I'd say easily. Write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Robert Joseph Member
since 2000-10-07
Posts 491South Carolina |
Martie, Karilea, VAS, Marge, and Kethry... Thanks so much, I'm pleased to know you enjoyed this piece. Robert Joseph |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a from wonderful angle and well written!! enjoyed muchly!! |
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