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Sunshine
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0 posted 2000-11-26 09:56 AM


                        She is a kindred spirit
                        she flies

                        and deep within her soul
                        she cries

so may I reach across
the barrier of land
may I reach across
gently take your hand

come walk with me
talk with me
lift my spirits as you
do so easily

for I've come to treasure
every whim of you
and smile of you
and in memory
I glide with you
in dreams that make up we

come stand with me
in this dream of light
here on the porch
of ever-right
and sit in this rocker
alongside of me
and sip a glass
of sun-made tea

and I shall sit here
at your feet
and you may braid words
as you comb my hair
for when you're done
then I will share
the same with you
as we do
back and forth
and forth again

this small bit of
passion
our words we come
to share

it is all I ever seek
I'm so glad you're here.




Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2000-11-26 09:58 AM


Karilea,
This is beautiful in ways I can't even begin to describe.
Write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

ethome
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2 posted 2000-11-26 10:00 AM


I agree wholeheartedly with your sentiments Sunshine.....this is a wonderful expression of the hand of friendship.....Karilea you're a great girl!
Balladeer
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3 posted 2000-11-26 10:24 AM


Who could ask for a friendship better expressed than this....and between two such incredibly special people. Can I be a friend, too. My hair is very easy to braid....
Marsha
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4 posted 2000-11-26 10:34 AM


Kari, that is one of your better best, oh kid this is sooooooooo great. A wonder to behold, and I love this I really and truly do. Absolutely excellant, you missus are a fantastic poet, as too is Kit. Together you are two of my dearest soul friends.
Take care
             MM
(I'm working, but I'm taking a break)
Don't you dare say when do I ever do anything else,  
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Sven
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5 posted 2000-11-26 11:32 AM


Now I know that it's going to be a good day!!

Ladies, thank you so much. . .  

-------------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-11-26 02:29 PM


Kethry, thank you...Kit has always been a special person...I thank you for your kind response...

ethome, I so like it when a man of renown agrees with me...

Balladeer in braids...THIS would be interesting...

Marsha...Kit is the poet....I am the official poet wannabe....

Sven...all days are good days...it is what we do with them that makes them special...thank you...




Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




Kit McCallum
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7 posted 2000-11-26 04:22 PM


I honestly don't know what I'd do without you guys. Karilea, this is so incredibly touching, and so beautiful. Thank you so very, very much. One minute I'm sad, and the next, I'm smiling so hard my cheeks hurt. This is such a beautiful portrayal of kindred spirits, and you've touched my very soul. This is truly beautiful, and something I shall treasure Karilea. You really are "Sunshine" in the sweetest and most honest sense. Thank you!  

Best wishes and much appreciation (and please do come join us Michael ... I'd love to see you in braids!    )
/Kit

Sunshine
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8 posted 2000-11-27 09:07 AM


Kit, how can we not applaud you when it is you who is so special?  Thanks for peeking in...[knew your name would grab you!]< !signature-->

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ







[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-27-2000).]

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