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Uncontrollable Season, Yet Be Thankful
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Uncontrollable Season, Yet Be Thankful |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Uncontrollable Season, Yet Be Thankful Well trimmed and tamed the earth in summer time, but with fall progressing the loss of control begins to march upon the land giving way to changing season. From darkest green to yellows and gold’s the canopy begins a changing of dress, giving way to nudity’s ambiance, with much gracefulness and vigor having only one direction “completeness”. Timely the coming of the wind as well, for what better way to leave the stage than to float ever so elegantly towards permanent peace, marking another chapter in the never ending cycle of life. The chill in the air and the crackling under foot of tossed colorful remnants gives the heart and soul a feeling of marriage to the seasons festivities thus we give thanks for that which has given of its self in free’ness and abundance. The absolute drenching shall cleanse and wash away all impurities strewn about giving a sense of freshness and free’ness to the earth, hence uncontrollable yet awe inspiring to say the least the changing of the seasons. So be thankful, be well, give of your self freely, for this season is just a resting of nature’s magnificent rein. Soon she will yet again hold not a single seed back, all will go forth in splendid glory to shine in the seasonal sun and warmth of Her loving embrace. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Cerenity, Very well done, keep the writing coming. Loved it very much. "The absolute drenching shall cleanse and wash away all impurities strewn about giving a sense of freshness and free’ness" Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Cerenity. . . Wise words to us all my friend. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Daniel and Sven Thank you both for your kind replys, the trees are loosing their leaves fast here, but today its about eighty, go figure, nights are very cold, well for California any way. Hope you both had a great holiday. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Cerenity! Lovely! Denise |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Cerenity~ This is just a lovely, lovely piece from your pen. Such a vivid display of thoughts. What a pleasure to read. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
As a nature lover, this one really caught my eye. IT was well expressed. What is that you express in your eyes? It seems to me more than all the words I have read in my life. Walt Whitman |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Denise, Marge, Irish Rose Thank you ladies for your loving replys, Oh I miss being able to be here at passions so much, and I mentally miss reading the poetry here, but most of all my friends, I've taken on a job that eats up all of my time it seems and I already hate it, but it is a must in order to stay a float as they say! Im trying to figure out some kind of routine so I can spend time here at passions, thank you again and I miss all of you so much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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