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A Leaking Crack in My Heart
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A Leaking Crack in My Heart |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL 
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There you are, Or so I'm thinking it so. Just where, Did you tuck yourself away, For so long, While I longed for you, Got over you, And seeing you again, Wanted you once more, And even more. Well, let me tell you, About that piece of my heart you stole. I'd like it back, But love doesn't give full refunds, So I'll have to dwell on you. Your voice, Your imagined smile, And your once captivating presence. My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber. |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Have you been looking into my stuff?? This is heartfelt. . . ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Temptress, Very well done, with lots of beautiful thoughts. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Sven: A look into each other's hearts and minds...What more could I ask for, but the compliment you have paid me with your question about this?  Thanks for reading, and may the night treat you wonderfully. Daniel: Thank you for enjoying and reading. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Temptress, "Oh" have you said it so very perfectly here, I loved the refund line too, thank you enjoyed this one much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Oh Sweet Tempt, I'm always here watching you... Your writing is some of the best there is... That's probably cause you read to much... HA.! I gor to give it to you on this one... I think you struck a chord in everyone. I think I'm going to sneak it right into my private Lil' library. Thanks so much for the sharing. dale |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Temptress...anyone who steals your heart should get Life...with you. Your writing is so real which makes it so special....  |
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Temptress
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Cerenity: Thanks. I'm glad you liked it. The refund line just seemed to fit, but I'm still not sure how to describe the tone I used it in. Dale: Thank you very much. I can usually count on you to read my writing. Its nice to have someone watching over me! Sweet Balladeer Man: Thank you...thank you...thank you...Sometimes I think my writing is too honest. |
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