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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
Three trees past the old barn that is where they lay broken by his strange hands heads covered by a sack so the glazed gazes don't follow him home tonight He is happy |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This is just tooooooooooo spooky! I don't know what's been broken and it scares me for whatever it is. The sack over their eyes and the reason for it......eeeeeeek! The final statement: He is happy. That really sends chills through me. If this be your aim, you are SUCCESSFUL!!! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
And now I am supposed to SLEEP tonight? Gee thanks James...welcome to Passions |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
JB, Well done. Welcome to Passions. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
thanks guys for the replies, but I am an old hand at this place, just forgot my old name and password-starting from scratch |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
LMAO....too too funny...cmon then just whisper in my ear who you really are. |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
well Paula that is my name- so much for secret identities |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Well AKA James nice way to start... I think... But I've been in and out of here myself. Unfortunately my art in prose gives me away as to who I am. So I'll give you bump on this... But I'd like to see your rest..! This piece has a strange effect. dale |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
You mean you are NOT Superman? Im heartbroken...and this still gives me chills everytime I slip in here |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
my mouth popped wide open when i read this post....this gave me some chills, James welcome to passions  |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I'm thinking JaBowie......was it? Any way.......wow! this is sooooo creepy......kinda like Dean Koontz......I liked this.glad to welcome you back!  -SEA |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Well welcome back...and I enjoyed the intrigue of this...creepy? Yep. But I LIKE creepy. (My entire life is a TESTIMONY to creepy. sigh.) But thanks for the read--a very visual work. |
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JamesBowie Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 252big old Bangor Maine up by the shack |
well Sea yeah you know who I am, And yes I have to admit there is a big dean koontz influence here- thanks for the compliment- and to all of you thank you for the warm re-welcome A real man kisses his children goodnight |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
JB, I visualized a creepy scarecrow which sent eerie thoughts this way - Great visual!! Maybe it's the water I'm drinking today but I just thought I'd tell ya what I thought... And oh... welcome back whoever you are Coco |
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