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Wrapped in a Cloud.
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Wrapped in a Cloud. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
"I wrapped myself in a cloud" today My young friend excitingly Allowed me near her sudden happiness "The cloud, took me beyond Everest Above the most beautiful rainbow Allowing me to soar over sorrow Took me to Heaven's gate I met my parents, they were angels They held me in their arms They told me they still loved me Life on earth for them were so much harm. I am fine now, I am a happy orphan" I held her in my arms Holding back the tears I said, I'm here, Your life has just begun. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This was a heavely vision and I love every word of it. Thank you so much for sharing. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Alwye
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Member Elite
since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
A beautiful picture you paint here, I enjoyed!  *Krista Knutson* "One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar." Helen Keller |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely vision, lovely dream! |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh yes Daniel...such a lovely feeling walking in a cloud...fantastic my friend |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful poem. |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Startime, Alwye, Vas, and Paula, Thank you and cheers, orphans are often in terrible dilemmas, not knowing the fate of their parents, I have known a few orphans and they have all been very neglected in many ways. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Poetminister, Thank you for your kind reply. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Daniel J D, this is a beautiful visionary poem. It is really angelically beautiful. I love it. Excellant write, and so lovely. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Marsha, Amongst us there are many people in the same situation, we have to reach out to them. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Daniel, this was beautiful and *hugs* to you for posting this! amazing piece, and wonderful poet and person you are. take care. ~amy~ |
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