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Charisma
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0 posted 11-25-2000 05:29 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma


Thunder

Dark clouds gathering
rolling thunder and lightning
mighty power sight

Charisma

© Copyright 2000 Theresia A. Makatita-Poortman - All Rights Reserved
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Charisma,
wonderful Haiku.

When's your birthday your Tuesday or My Tuesday? Date please so I won't let it pass unremembered.

Write on
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
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2 posted 11-25-2000 06:09 PM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

I am glad that you like the haiku...
I enjoy doing this more and more, don't know if it's the right way, but well I am learning  

my birthday is next tuesday... 28 november  
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Charisma, you're doing it right!  

This is excellent. . . keep it up. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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it seems right to me...

glad to see that you are spreading your poetic wings and be sure that i will read what you have to offer...

write on, fellow haikuist
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This piece is great Charisma...I loved the graphic too!
Peace,



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This piece is great Charisma...I loved the graphic too!
Peace,



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Charisma~ I liked this one, the graphic goes perfectly with it!   -SEA
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Charisma~
You are doing just wonderfully with this Haiku.
A delight to see and read.
*Hugs* to you, dear poet friend.
~*Marge*~


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Charisma,
Wonderful haiku...nicely done.

Poeminister  
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Oh I do enjoy Haikus ... very nicely done Charisma, and perfect graphic!  

Best wishes,
/Kit
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Charisma,
How very powerful in such wonderfully chosen words.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
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12 posted 11-27-2000 07:53 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

Sven: thank you for your kind reply, I am glad that you like it.

Kaile: thank you my friend for your wonderful words, and I am honoured that you like to read what I am offering inhere... hope always that it is worth to read  

Nate: and I thank you twice to come in and take the time to read and reply..  
I'm glad that you liked it.

Sea: thank you, my friend...your comments means a lot for me....appreciated them well.

Marge: (((hugs))) back at ya, and you know that I love to have your comments', and I am glad that you like it...thank you for taking time to read.


Poeminister: thank you for your kind reply, and that you stop by.  

Kit: I am glad that you love Haiku's...and like this little one from me.

Daniel: thank you for your wonderful reply, its always a pleasure to read your comments.


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I love the passion and power of thunder storms so the title drew me but the vision your words gave me pulled me in. Thank you so very much for this wonderful read.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com
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Startime: thank you for your wonderful comment, and I like thunderstorms either, if they are far away, but it's always mighty to view it.
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Happy Birthday!!!!

A beatuiful Haiku...from a beautiful heart!
May your day be filled with blessings to
help you celebrate~


The best and most beautiful things
in the world cannot be seen or even touched
---- they must be felt with the heart~
*??*
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Butterfly: thank you for your wonderful wishes and blessings.... it was a wonderful day indeed.

((hugs))
Charisma
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Very very lovely writing. I loved this haiku and your graphic. I also write haiku forms and I look forward to reading your work. i was at your homepage a bit already. Very well done , my new friend!!!!

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko


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Just because some people are just too lovely to forget~

LOVE YOU my friend~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~
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