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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2000-11-25 05:01 PM


The Woman I Miss

It doesn't really matter
if those other women don't like me.
If they don't call I don't care at all.
See them or not I'll be alright.
I don't care if they miss me.
I no longer yearn for them to kiss me.
But there is one special woman in this world
that i miss so much right now.
And while she's away I want her to miss me.
And when she comes home I want her to kiss me.
And in the meantime if she would give me a call
I'd Love to hear her soothing voice
and share the sweetness of her personality.
It would pretty much make my day
and place a smile upon my face.
But for now I'll keep thinking of the possibilities
that may occur
if she's missing me half as much as I'm missing her.

Jameslee@November25,2000

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Startime
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1 posted 2000-11-25 05:13 PM


I am sure she is missing you as much as this wonderful poem says you are missing her. You have a great talent with words to express your love. Thank you so much for sharing.

Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com

Charisma
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2 posted 2000-11-25 05:57 PM


your love is visible through your words,
I hope that she miss you too, and will kiss you soon....

Take care my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

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3 posted 2000-11-25 06:55 PM


I'm sure that she is my friend. . . I'm sure that she is. . .



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Paula Finn
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4 posted 2000-11-26 02:00 AM


If she's not she's crazy...
Daniel J D
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5 posted 2000-11-26 02:07 AM


James,
So much emotion in here, beautiful my friend.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

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6 posted 2000-11-26 10:33 AM


James,

   Awww.. this is so good   Your love and vunerability shine ... and it shows what a truely sweet person you are(which we here at passions are lucky enough to know)




~~Tara aka rp25 :o)

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2000-11-26 01:47 PM


Thank you Startime, Charisma, Sven, Paula, Daniel and Rosepetals.  I sincerely hope she is missing me right now and perhaps later today she will give me that kiss I have waited for...James
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8 posted 2002-04-03 02:51 PM




(sigh) This is so sad but beautiful, sweet friend, I hope you have finally me tthe woman of your dreams and declared your love for her just as I'm sure she will always love you so much and think of you! (big huggsssss) We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is fabulous! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet James, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

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9 posted 2003-01-27 10:10 AM


sad...
JamesMichael
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10 posted 2004-05-10 03:35 AM


Thank you Noah and passing shadows...James
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