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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
I believe I am everything I know, that "I am all that I have met," and that all the friends I have ever had walk beside me wherever I go. I believe I am a part of everything there is and was, that you are also part of me, that you and I are universal I believe that all religion's in the heart. that all the deities we worship, all the demons that we fear, live only in ourselves. I believe that everything will pass. I believe that Time will always win. I believe that nothing lasts forever, in Nature, in People, and in Change, that all Life goes back from where it came. And I believe that Friendship is for Life: and I believe someone will love me, even though I don't know who she'll be, that something I will bring is needed, that by someone I am being sought. Jaime |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Jaime...welcome to Passions and what a beautiful debut you have made...This is a delightful poem with a lot that makes you think...GREAT job |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Jaime - This is absolutely lovely... Welcome to Passions - It's an wonderful place full of wonderfup people... You've made a grand entrance.. Check your email for a special greeting..  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jamie, Hi and what a great debut this is, welcome to you and I know that you'll love it here. Passions the place to be. This is a wonderfully written and expressed piece, and I love this one it is about life. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This is beautifully written about all forms of love ending on the wonderful note of love eternal. I loved this poem. You did a magnificent job. Thank you so very much. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Hi Jaime! Welcome to Passions! Take comfort in the truth that love is eternal. Deb |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
Jaime!!! Nice to read you here! Make yourself at home and let me know if you need anything. This is a great entry poem. I look forward to reading more from you.  |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Jamie, welcome my friend to Passions!! This is an excellent poem. . . I like it when poets share their hearts like this. . . and you've done just that. . . Hope to see more from you soon. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Alan Senior Member
since 2000-09-12
Posts 1499right next door |
Welcome to the family Jaime....Wonderful start. I hope to see more from you Alan |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Jaime, Welcome to Passions. Wonderful poem all from your heart to mine. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Jamie welcome to Passions! What a marvelous poem full of seasoned wisdom and truth and here's to you and your search for love and companionship.....Have a nice day you've just made mine better........ethome |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Welcome! I applaud. Just beautiful. To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
this reminds me of a favored song, which will now play round and round in my mind all day...a most delightful Sunday you've begun for me, thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
I just wanted to read this one more time...it really stuck in my mind |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Jaime~ Welcome to Passions. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jamie-- welcome to passions! this is an amazing first piece...heck it's an amazing first piece period!! this really made me think and it also brought a smile to my face... i especially liked this verse, "And I believe that Friendship is for Life: and I believe someone will love me, even though I don't know who she'll be, that something I will bring is needed, that by someone I am being sought." SHE is out there...just keep believing! take care, and again welcome! ~amy~ |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Jaime~ Welcome to our family! I enjoyed this heart-felt poem, I'll have to echo eveyone else and say, she is out there waiting for you........it will happen.....usually when you least expect it -SEALive,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Welcome Welcome... beautiful entrance... Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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Jaime Fradera Senior Member
since 2000-11-25
Posts 843Where no tyranny is tolerable |
Dear reader. I deeply appreciate your attention to reading my stuff. Please note, however, that for technical reasons I can not yet use the "reply" function (I am blind and use a screen access program). I can read your reply, but please do not be offended if I do not personally reply to your reply on the board using the icons, but love to respond to mail, and have the time of my life with it! I hope to resolve the posting issue in the next few days I want to thank you again for taking the time to read my piece, and look forward to correspond with you. Cheers, Jaime |
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