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Snowflakes Fall |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada 
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Snowflakes Fall Karen Torbiak 2000 Snowflakes fall on soft lips melting slow a sweet kiss Loving eyes shine with love looking deep take my heart Gentle touch hand to face tracing love breath a sigh Bending close feel my lips kissing sweet taste of love Holding close arms held tight sighing heart feel my love Snowflakes fall not felt now lovers share soft sweet touch Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
There's something romantic about winter and you've captured it beautifully.Lovely poem. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Lovely, lovely, gentle romance in the soft chill of winter. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
sweet romance in the winter. love it.. well done. Charisma |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Ah... such a beautiful love poem. Enjoyed it much!  "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
sssshhhhhhhhh did you know that you can hear snowflakes? listen. . . wonderful poem. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
Thank you all so very much for your wonderful comments. I love to write about love and romance so you will find you may be saturated with it from me. This is such a loving board and I feel so blessed to have found all of you. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i enjoyed the minimialist approach here |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Startime--Lovely poem. Enjoyed this much. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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