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michelax
Junior Member
since 2000-07-05
Posts 16
Malta

0 posted 2000-11-25 06:33 AM


Blessed

Contentedly I await her embrace each day
Longing for her love, her sweet loving way
Her emerald eyes peering deep into mine
I'm clothed in affection, so warm every time

I reach out to touch her, to feel her smooth skin
I listen to her being, her goodness within
I walk by her side, so proud and so pleased
Knowing she is with me, my love now released

She listened all so carefully, to what I had to said,
All past mistakes and follies, to what my life has read
She took me for what I am today, not for what passed with pain
She showed me warmth filled sunny days, and took away my rain

Perhaps her greatest love to me, as vital as all the rest
Was she opened all herself to me, allowed me to love her best
I feel so changed, so warm today, I now feel truly free
Free to love her in the way I know how, and simply free to be me

I feel good.

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JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-11-25 06:40 AM


Nice writing...nice title...when someone accepts us we do feel free...James
Janet Marie
Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554

2 posted 2000-11-25 08:27 AM


She took me for what I am today, not for what passed with pain
She showed me warmth filled sunny days, and took away my rain

Perhaps her greatest love to me, as vital as all the rest
Was she opened all herself to me, allowed me to love her best
I feel so changed, so warm today, I now feel truly free
Free to love her in the way I know how, and simply free to be me

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hey you.. .....what a treat to see your name here this morn...
and to see such a sincere, glowing with love poem from you...
wonderful to see you "feeling so good"
nice to have you back in poetry land.
take care
jm

There are moments ...
when I Love you
beyond the limits of my human heart ...

...you will always be mine.

Collin Raye


BloomingRose
Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092
Florida
3 posted 2000-11-25 06:39 PM


Wow! You are indeed blessed. It sure sounds like that goes both ways for the two of you.
Very loving poem, I know she smiles to read this one!
Deb  

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