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JulieAnn
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since 2000-06-12
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0 posted 2000-11-25 06:01 AM


For my second born Jordan, I love you.....

You are my ray of sunshine
you make every day so bright
even though you and your brother
always seem to fight
you make everything worhtwhile
just with your sweet smile
you make my heart skip a beat
when you light up for your fav treat
you make all the people freeze
when you say thank you and please
always charming and oh so sweet
you knock the girls off their feet
i miss the cuddles and "snug as a bug"
even miss your candy stuck on the rug
i miss you forever calling out my name
pulling me aside, just to play a game
i know i didn't always do what you'd liked
but i know you won't forget that
mountain we hiked
and if i could fly to where you are now
i'd make up for all that lost time somehow
because you are my baby
youngest of two
and i would shed tears
if i knew you were blue
and someday i hope to explain
why i didn't board that plane
mommy still loves you
she knows daddy does too
that's why she trusts him
to take care of you
and when the time comes
that i can have you here
i'll show you how much
i always cared
so for now my sweet SONshine
keep smiling for me
we'll be together soon
just wait and see.....

I love you and miss you very much Jordan, and now the whole world knows how much.....stay sweet for me
love always, Mom :@)

Julie :)



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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-11-25 06:05 AM


Jordan woulda been so sad if his poem wasn't as great as Justin's but you did them both justice. very nice
JamesMichael
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2000-11-25 06:27 AM


Reminds me of the time when my wife left me and took my three sons with her and I would hear a young boy calling out to his dad at the supermarket or the store and I would think it was one of my sons calling me...I know this is a hard time for you...take care of yourself and visit with your children as soon as possible...James
Sunshine
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3 posted 2000-11-25 06:56 AM


Oft times the hardest decisions are the ones in God's hands...be well, take care, God bless you all...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




BloomingRose
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4 posted 2000-11-25 06:36 PM


Double hugs going your way!
Deb  

kaile
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5 posted 2000-11-29 11:51 AM


JulieAnn,
i only wish i knew the right words to comfort you....

take care

Victoria
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6 posted 2000-11-29 12:44 PM


They grow up very fast..my son has children of his own now..seems like yesterday he was a baby..wishing you and your sons well..

                ~Victoria~
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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
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soozieque_28
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since 2000-11-28
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Tennessee
7 posted 2000-11-29 01:11 PM


I love this poem, and Inow how it feels to miss your son...only m son was killled in a wreck when he was three...yesterday would have been his 5th birthday.  I wish you the best and hope you see your children soon. Take care.
         Peggy

Charisma
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8 posted 2000-11-30 05:24 PM


read with tears in my eyes.....I can understand the pain in your heart.
wish you strength

((warm huge hugs))
Charisma

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