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JulieAnn
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0 posted 2000-11-25 05:37 AM


For Justin....I miss you my sweetie....

There's no light in my window
tonight i'm not home
there's no joy in my tears
tonight i'm crying alone
i remember your brown eyes
innocent and bright
i remember your tiny hands
how you loved me to hold them tight
i remember the band aids
they made your owie all gone
i remember you sweetie
i hope to see you before long
and i didn't mean to leave you
i hope someday you'll understand
sometimes mommies and daddies
can't do what they planned
but my dear no matter
how far apart we are
i'll climb the highest ladder
just to get where you are
just so i could tell you
you'll always be in my heart
and someday maybe you and i
could make a brand new start
right now i just hope you understand
why we have to be apart......  

I love you & miss you very much Justin....and I have posted it here on the web so the world will know!! Love always, Mom

Julie :)



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wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-11-25 06:03 AM


this is sad miss julieann and well written emotion such as this is difficult to pull off. thank you for sharing this wonderful piece o yuh heart
Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-11-25 07:10 AM


Both sons shall know one day, their mother's love will come to stay...

special thoughts are sent your way...


Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




BloomingRose
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since 2000-08-09
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3 posted 2000-11-25 06:34 PM


Very moving and tender write from you.
I understand the pain of losing a child. In my case 3 years. Now we are as one, as mother and daughter should be.
Continue to trust that one day you and your son will reunite.
Hugs, Deb

JamesMichael
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4 posted 2000-11-25 07:01 PM


You know after reading these two poems you have posted for your sons you have started me thinking of my sons...it is so nice that you can write these sweet words to them...James
kaile
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5 posted 2000-11-29 11:43 AM


i think nothing i say here will ease away your anguish and pain but i guess i want to say that i read this and STRENGTH to you...im sure your son will understand why both of you will have to be apart.....
soozieque_28
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since 2000-11-28
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6 posted 2000-11-29 01:16 PM


I have now read both of your poems for your sons and I think they are both beautiful and so full of emotion...very moving.  Again, I wish you well.
              Peggy

Charisma
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7 posted 2000-11-30 05:32 PM


I have read your two poems now, and I can feel the desperation of a mom who loves her sons so deeply.
I will pray for you and your childeren, and wish you a lot of strength.

take care
((hugs))
Charisma

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