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djsyours
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0 posted 2000-11-25 12:54 PM


At the beginning of summer
I lost my best friend
Never thought it would happen
I was torn apart when it ended

It was over something
She had a bad feeling about
But I went and did it anyhow
Now I have to do without

I've tried talking to her
To tell her how sorry I was
But she won't speak to me
When I ask why her daughter says "because"

We were very very close
We could talk about anything
Day after day, for hours on end
Now it's over, and I have nothing

I really miss her friendship
When I lost it that summer day
I wish I could take it back
And "I'm sorry" I'd say



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Startime
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1 posted 2000-11-25 01:00 AM


How very sad it is when someone looses a close friend. This poem is heartfelt and sincere with love. My heart hurts for your pain. Thank you so much for the read.
kaile
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2 posted 2000-11-26 12:19 PM


perhaps you can show her this poem so that she would get to realise how much you value her friendship?....

i ditto...thanx for sharing and i hope all turns out well

SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18
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3 posted 2000-11-28 09:04 PM




djsyours
I can relate to this poem because, me and my best friend had problems where we didnt speak for a long time. She hurt me though but we've made up and I hope the same can happen for you. Guys/girls come and go but true friends really hurt to lose. Im sorry your hurting now!   Cheer up soon...
Take care, Lisa  



~in order to gain, you have to lose~



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