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raleighbttrfly
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since 2000-11-21
Posts 160
Raleigh NC

0 posted 2000-11-24 11:53 PM


Drink my mother drink,
Slip away to your happy times
Times long gone by

Drink my mother if only to forget
Forget the pain and your sorrow
For it will all be back tomorrow

Drink my mother let it go
Let go of the regret
And don’t bother with what you never did

Drink my mother drink
Be happy and remember the ones u left
Left behind like unwanted dolls
Drink my mother drink
And don’t worry about me
I will be ok

Drink my mother drink
For I never knew you anyway
Never were you there to care

Drink my mother drink
Let it all be washed away
All the time you missed

Drink mother drink
I will fined my own way
Not that u ever noticed any way

Drink my mother drink
But I pray that u see one day
All u missed

Drink my mother drink
I pray that I may never be
Like you one day


I want you all to know that even tho my work my be sad Im am not. my bierthday is comeing up and that allways makes me think of my past. I have alot pf happy memories to but the sad ones are what come out.



[This message has been edited by raleighbttrfly (edited 11-25-2000).]

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Irie
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since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
1 posted 2000-11-25 01:28 AM


raleighbttrfly....Welcome to Passions!  

Great expression of feelings and thoughts.
I'm glad you are happy and seem to be able to get past the past.
I hope through PiP you will be able to bring those happy memories out.
I wish you a wonderful Birthday  



~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



Irie
Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493
Washington State
2 posted 2000-11-25 01:28 AM


raleighbttrfly....Welcome to Passions!  

Great expression of feelings and thoughts.
I'm glad you are happy and seem to be able to get past the past.
I hope through PiP you will be able to bring those happy memories out.
I wish you a wonderful Birthday  



~Sheri

"The things that come to those that wait may be the things
left by those who got there first"



serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

3 posted 2000-11-25 10:14 PM


Happy Birthday to you, and I believe that this is the first of yours I've read..and it is a powerful piece here...my hugs to you, I hope to read many more in the future!
Sven
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East Lansing, MI USA
4 posted 2000-11-26 11:57 AM


Isn't that the way that it always is?  Why is that??

Excellent poem. . . a lot of feelings in this. . .

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