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Toerag
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Ala bam a

0 posted 2000-11-24 11:20 PM


I'm not sure, and I don't know,
To be poetic is to bare one's soul.
Go ahead and give it a try,
Tell a tale, maybe lie.

Go ahead and step in this stuff,
One or two times, should be enough
Give it a kick and a few "ha ha's"
It may be the cure for the holiday blahs?

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insect
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since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014

1 posted 2000-11-25 12:18 PM


OK Toe
I'll give it a go
But before I start I want you to know
I've had a few and caught a little glow

Lets cheer up this place from the holiday blahs
A poem, a rhyme or just some Ha! Ha's!
Not because were crazy just because
So Passion Poets change what was

Now that I've replied Toe won't be least
Because of this reply I've just released
Come on friends make this a blast
If you don't I'm gonna be last


Toerag
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Ala bam a
2 posted 2000-11-25 12:18 PM


Geesch! I knew all this garbage I posted tonight was real garbage, but I thought at least someone would tell me how bad of garbage it is?......

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-25-2000).]

Toerag
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Ala bam a
3 posted 2000-11-25 12:20 PM


Thanks Insect

[This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-25-2000).]

Kethry
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since 2000-07-29
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4 posted 2000-11-25 04:54 AM


Toe,
It's too cryptic to laugh at and too sad to sigh at. Don't know the meaning but I like the rhyme.
Be well
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

Nan
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5 posted 2000-11-25 07:02 AM


Toe, my friend... Have you been kickin' garbage around again?.. Don't be stubbing your big ole Toe on anything dangerous out there...
Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-11-25 07:07 AM


Hope the doldrums don't stay long, Toe...hope they're easy come, faster go...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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7 posted 2000-11-26 03:28 AM


You've given us so many laughs... and cured a lot of blahs, whatever the season. *S* But your serious poems pack a powerful wallop. *S* You're right... Some poems are simply fingertips conveying a thought or playing rhyme time or seeing where a phrase will go... but for me, that's fairly rare. Most of mine introduce the person behind the pen... albeit in bits and pieces. *S* And I think that's the case for most of us... a bit of soul peeks through whether we gave it permission to do so or not. *S* I like this, sweets!!
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