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Potential Erotica
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
Deleted... [This message has been edited by Toerag (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Toerag Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622Ala bam a |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Well I went in search of your poetry ... per your teasing request I saw your post on Deers poem ... your poetic little jest. So I wandered thru the forums in search of the great Toe ... Im aware of your celebrity of your infamy I know. Then I find this enticing title as Erotica is a subject that I adore But to my dismay this was deleted and left me wanting more. You see I love to read of romance and of kisses full of spice I have much respect for a good set of lips wet smooches are oh so nice. So tell me Mr Toe... what here was such a sin? why was this deleted was it too hot for Opens thin skin? Next time dont delete... simply post it in Adult's allowing grace then send me the http ... and put a smile on my face.    LOL later-did the mean ole mods make ya delete-gator jm Just kidding my "Deer moderator" we are TRYING TO BE GOOD N OPEN |
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Local Rebel Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-21
Posts 5767Southern Abstentia |
now yanno Toe... this may be your finest work yet.....you even spelled Deleted right... |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
Burst out laughing at Janet!!!!!  Too funny! Aye, I was right there with you! To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Toe, was it too risque or too risky to post Honestly Toe I'm not laughing at you I'm laughing with you. lol Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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doreen peri Member Elite
since 1999-05-25
Posts 3812Virginia |
i can identify with this one. i had potential erotica deleted myself before great theme. loved the simplicity of it. no rhyme, no reason. i couldn't have said it better myself. and y'know what? this piece is potentially the most erotic poem i've ever read.... leaves so much to the imagination, so much intrigue in it.. one of the most effective methods of erotica is "don't show it all".... loved it, Toe! great writing! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*sigh* Deleted.....tittle pull me in...and now.......mmmmm......wondering what I would found here. Charisma |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Toe, doreen suggested don't show it all, in fact don't show anything and you can still reel em in. Btw I love your blank verse. lol Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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kitkat Senior Member
since 2000-01-11
Posts 878Nova Scotia |
Lured me in..hook line and sinker..lmao such a tease you are. |
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