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Sunshine
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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2000-11-24 10:41 PM


When you Hear the Call

in yielding declaration,
in this undertone of admiration
in this your whispering
of contemplated reverie
comes the dream, gentle, serene,
of what you mean to me

affectionate is your tone,
casting golden glockenspiel
if resonance had color,
golden is of tincture real
and pliant molds your words,
comes silky your appeal

thus I yield, most willingly,
so speak anew your words to me
and whisper thus this melody,
sing again the song of we
and mold the pliant unto thee
when faint the dream of you is me



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




© Copyright 2000 Karilea Rilling Jungel - All Rights Reserved
Alwye
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1 posted 2000-11-24 11:01 PM


Absolutely gorgeous Sunshine.  

*Krista Knutson*

"One can never consent to creep when one feels an impulse to soar."
Helen Keller


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2 posted 2000-11-24 11:09 PM


Listening. . .



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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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3 posted 2000-11-25 12:04 PM


I'll sing to thee in tones so low
That only you and God shall know
As, from my lips the words will part
To find safe harbor in thy heart.

My simple song of love will be
A philharmonic symphony
A siren's song to lead you through
Whatever gates now closed to you.

By all means yield to song sweet
Until the day our voices meet
And blend in one true melody
The song of you and song of me.


hehe. Sorry....got carried away. You inspired me, sunshine  


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4 posted 2000-11-25 05:11 AM


Kari, this sings with your beauty, as clear as a bell, and it rings in delight. Wonderful love, truly wonderful.
I love this one too
Take care
             Imp  
              MM


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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5 posted 2000-11-25 06:07 AM


wow miss sunshine very very nice yuh
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6 posted 2000-11-25 08:42 AM


Very beautiful, Karilea! Lovely!

Denise

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7 posted 2000-12-15 11:19 AM


Geesh, I didn't answer any of you...I'm a dunce...

Krista, thank you...

Sven, I know you are!...

'Deer...I did all THAT?  Wow...wow...

Marsha, you know you are the one that helps me with the choir...thank you...

Walt...right back at ya! thank you...

denise, sometimes tells me you liked it?...LOL...thank you...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




ethome
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8 posted 2000-12-16 07:24 AM


I like that "if resonance had color...golden is of tincture real."  Man I'm learning where all those golden tones come from..oldie goldies, solid gold, gold records, golden hits of yesterday, golden voice and golden notes...ah such memories...I hope if I listen long enough he will hear the call and soothe your poetic anticipation......ummmm softly now...."comes silky your appeal."  love it!
Sunshine
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9 posted 2000-12-17 08:01 AM


Ethome, I truly believe that once we really start listening, then the heart takes over... thank you for coming in to read...and for pointing out the "good" lines.......

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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10 posted 2000-12-18 05:19 PM


so speak anew your words to me
and whisper thus this melody,
sing again the song of we
===============
Almost missed this gem.

Wonderful Kari, wonderful.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.


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11 posted 2000-12-18 05:23 PM


So glad this was brought up to the top where it belongs!! Wow........so beautiful     (Ugh) -SEA
Poeminister
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12 posted 2000-12-18 05:37 PM


Sunshine--I love this.  Beautifully written.
kindasorta
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13 posted 2000-12-18 05:42 PM


allow me to add to the ongoing lovely verses,
can't resist sing-a-long's..

oh honey, can't you tell
there are no songs to sing of (we),
there is no (you ) in the songs I sing,
and keep the ( me ) from your melodies.

oh dear, the poem left and I was about to add another verse, (maybe I'll just come back)      cute, cute little teaser of song
making sure from here your gone!  

Irish Rose
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14 posted 2000-12-18 06:58 PM


Yes, it's absolutely gorgeous in every word!

"If you live to be a hundred, I want to live to be a hundred minus one day,
so I never have to live without you."

Winnie the Pooh



jwesley
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15 posted 2000-12-18 07:11 PM


"sing again the song of we"

Sunshine, loved this beautifully done piece.
Loved the above line so much.

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