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Silent Soliloquies |
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DreamSeeker Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72 |
Silent Soliloquies Hover in the Dark Maelstroms Emotions Grab the nearest DeathSong Wandering the HazeMaze Reacing For A Sound Of Love Of Hope Tomorrow I Know Will Never Come History Mocks Me All Past Laughs I Could Ever Hope To Touch You As I Begin Death And Death Only The Song That Is Soul It Reaches Defiant Giving It In And Given Calling All Souls Rise |
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LoveBug
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Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
This is a really good piece. We all feel like this sometimes. I can especally relate to this line: "History Mocks Me All Past Laughs I Could Ever Hope To Touch You". Keep up the good work! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I am amazed by you can turn a word and a phrase. . . "Grab the nearest DeathSong" Excellent. . . --------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You words sounded to me as one familiar as the echoed my own thought. You have a gift for touching the heart with your talented words. Thank you so much for this read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Celeste Senior Member
since 2000-11-11
Posts 597 |
You write pain well. Very sad. Brings forth intense emotion in the reader. I applaud your skill and your ability to touch the reader... To capture and live a moment is truly living |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
"Wandering the HazeMaze Reacing For A Sound" "HazeMaze" thats definitly what life seems like sometimes...Your emotions speak strongly in this poem. Nicely written. Poeminister "One short sleepe past, wee wake eternally, And death shall be no more, death, thou shalt die!" -John Donne [This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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