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Rockin' Rabbits---flip-out time
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Rockin' Rabbits---flip-out time |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Rockin’ Rabbits Virginia Salter rockin’ rabbits rhyming rice wouldn’t it be really nice if you sat beside the sea and whispered songs so heartedly that my heart was wooed and won by the early morning dawn and the lovely things you’d say when thoughts of loving came your way I’d love it , Sir, oh, yes, I would it should surely be so good that things with wings would pirouette high and lofty, so coquette, causing you and I to be in winning, lovely camaraderie © November 23, 2000 |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Well VAS you got me going on this one I how rabbits act after they make love ...don't know how much hidden meaning there is here.. I enjoyed the read very much there's some great lines there in that first.....ethome |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
No hidden meaning here. heh-heh. My dad raised rabbits when I was a teen but I was an adolescent..geez...I wouldn't be out there finding out about THAT! No, I just started thinking of words that started with our that had a rockin' rhythm. Then I went from there. Just 'flip-out' time as I said. Thanks for reading and commenting. I was just feeling 'playful,' and not in the Mr. C way from Happy Days. Or are you old enough to know about that? |
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