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BirdeeB
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since 2000-09-16
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0 posted 2000-11-24 01:23 PM


These four walls combine me to this
minute space time after time.
I only wish it was mine.

I slowly pause and take a breath.
I take it all in.
I don't feel so pinned.

I smile softly to the
little girl who passes me
by with tears in her eyes.
She whispers "Mommy,
can I be that?" she points
at the lady sitting on the bench.

She replys ever so softly
"Baby, she has no where to
go. All her family abandoned her."
Her nose wrinkles up from the stench.

And yet ever so boldly, I watch with
the eyes of a stoic, the little girl goes up and
smiles and says" Mame, I am sorry for your loss."
and with that she gave her a  hug.

With a gleam in her eye and tear drop
behind her heart.
She felt she was not a bug.

With the misery in her heart,
she felt she needed to part.
No more blissful thinking
or waiting until tomorrow.

She needed to be wanted.
she wanted no more sorrow.

The act of self destruction
she walked on.
D
   o
       w
            n

Past the bridge to the dock.

she whispered ever so softly
knowing the little girl will hear
her call " Don't worry I'll be back."

And with that she was gone
with the wind.

The Little girl nodded her
head ever so slightly and
a smile pressed her lips.






[This message has been edited by BirdeeB (edited 11-24-2000).]

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-11-24 11:57 PM


BirdeeB~
This is simply a heart-touching write.
Wonderful work it is !
Thank you so much for sharing it.
I believe it reaffirms the fact that even the smallest
gesture of love and friendship can change lives.
~*Marge*~


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2 posted 2000-11-25 07:50 PM


You never know what the smallest gesture of love can bring. . .

As shown here. . . wonderful. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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