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Weeping Willow
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Weeping Willow |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
She hides her tears behind soft leaved mystery, When her smile begins to wane in the heat of day always the lady, she cries alone... -R.T. 2/00 |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is most lovely.... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Tiersdin~ This reaches into the crevice of my heart - so very tenderly done. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
So evocative with such few words.Fine work. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very tender...weeping willow's are so neat to look at...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
This is perfect! A lovely and soft, evocative piece of work...I like this ALOT. Back to the top, m'friend...deserves another spin. |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
So many feelings stirred and in only 9 lines, Wow, wonderful writing Tiersden  Maree "If my words could blanket the skies and fill every corner and crevice of this earth, still this won't be enough" "Maree Russo" |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
This is poetry. . . Simply wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Tier, this is simply perfect, absolutely beautiful. Take care Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
Tier, you are fast becoming one of my favourite poets here... i have a soft spot for short poems and your poems are always short but intensely compacted.... pls post more...i'll read more  |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely! Denise |
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Tiersdin Member Elite
since 2000-11-17
Posts 2364east coast |
Thank you All for such lovely comments. I've enjoyed reading each and every one of them. Sorry for taking so long to post, I'd been busy all weekend! *smiles* -Robin |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
*applause* my friend, I would only wish it were my words. jwesley |
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