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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Ask me, How much I love you, Ask me , If I really care for you, Yes,my darling, As me anything , Ask me If this love of mine Is really meant to be, Ask me, To sing a song, I will sing it to you, So, Please come to me, I will take care of you, So that's why Iam asking you Is to be mine, Ask me, If my heart will become yours, Forever, Ask me How much I care for you, Just ask me, Cause It's true, I love you with all my heart, If you really see through my heart, You will believe how much I care about you, So ask me, Ask Me, |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ With answers as lovely and sincere as these - there is no reason now to ask. You did a wonderful job with this one, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Very nice poem Vandana... I liked it a lot. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Excellent writing...you really melt my heart with this...how I wish a special woman would say all those words to me...it seems like it is usually me saying these words to them...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Ask me if I liked this poem vandana. . . I did, I did. . .  My friends, I would have to dub vandana The Queen of Romance. . . ------------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
You made me smile with this---for I am just that same way. And most of the time? They don't even have to ask...I just volunteer!!! well, YOU know what I mean...sigh. And thank you so much for the lovely verse! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you,Marge!!!! Thank you,sven!!!!!!!!! Thank you,Jimelee12345,I always enjoy your poetry too!!!!!!! Thank you,Seren!!!!! |
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