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Serene,deVine (the fog is rolling)
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Serene,deVine (the fog is rolling) |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
* a collaborative effort between Serenity and deVine a wisp of fog on a stillborn night hushed whispers in the crowd and a gasp a chill of slight.. startled--that I cried aloud. fear stood and taunted me bade me walk into it's heart my feet froze in icy tear I choked upon a life of lark in my mind was your despair words I said in painful rush in my mind i found you there pain..remembering your touch fog pulled round me like a shroud I waited for The final song I cloaked the smoke about me--clad fog of cover-- I was glad... |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Wow, what a Serene and DeVine statement. It flowed like a river too. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
A DeVine moment in the Serenity of the fog. Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Serenity and PdV you write wonderfully together...well done  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautifully done, you two!! Lovely!! Denise |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I should have known. . . *sigh* Simply wonderful. . . ---------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
in a class of their own....girl poets that is... but o course good girl poets...ok poets that are girls that are good at writing poetry as in this fine collaboration |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
in my mind was your despair words I said in painful rush in my mind i found you there pain..remembering your touch fog pulled round me like a shroud I waited for The final song ================= so this is the result of combining poetic grace and mystic brilliance ... very cool mix you two... may I be greedy and say more please  later-serene and divine-duet-gators me |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
serenity is easy to write with, her inspiration made this easy!! Thank you for your kind words! And we do plan to write together again...if we can stop giggling long enough!  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Now I am really cracking up!!!! I swear I was hunting this down to thank everyone and tell you how easy it is to write with Sharon!!! oh...my, giggling again...thanks all...and thank YOU sharon...heee heee hee. |
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