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Jade and Strength
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Jade and Strength |
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Michael G Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579Nashville |
I question my presence on this earth of small wonders that have past me by, where angels may have kissed the land then slowly they rose to the sky. I have been of foolish praise that has tempted me to my shame leaving it upon the high ocean cliffs allowing me to live again. Of fair maiden, with eyes the color jade who by her own strength, does love me has come into my heart like air showing me her inner beauty. I once thought I new love only to have the dream explode yet kind words and true emotions come when she brushes me with the slightest touch. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oooooooo really cool poem i liked it all and it should be longer is all i can say cuz i wanna enjoy it more. ok reread |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Michael G, great write here. Write on Kethry |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is beautiful, Michael! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
The title drew me in, and I found love softly spoken throughout... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I question my presence on this earth of small wonders that have past me by, where angels may have kissed the land then slowly they rose to the sky. ================ Of fair maiden, with eyes the color jade who by her own strength, does love me has come into my heart like air showing me her inner beauty. I once thought I new love only to have the dream explode yet kind words and true emotions come when she brushes me with the slightest touch. ================= and "she" inspires wonderous poetry in you and I inhale every word ...savour every line your poetry has been missed by these eyes take care gentle poet of the wind  me There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Of fair maiden, with eyes the color jade who by her own strength, does love me has come into my heart like air showing me her inner beauty. I once thought I new love only to have the dream explode yet kind words and true emotions come when she brushes me with the slightest touch. What lies beneath, is the only thing that matters. Perhaps you are so easily able to accept her into your heart, because she sees your inner beauty. Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
"yet kind words and true emotions come when she brushes me with the slightest touch." Wow.. this is a beautiful piece. You certianly have a way with words. I really loved this piece. Sometimes, love is the only truth.  Keep up the great work."Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Skyfyre Senior Member
since 1999-08-15
Posts 1906Sitting in Michael's Lap |
Michael: A commendable piece of work. I especially enjoyed the fourth and fifth lines. --Linda Remember: maintaining a positive attitude may not solve all your problems, but it will certainly annoy enough people to make it worth the effort. |
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