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Hurry to Dreams |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I will wish there were times of when As a child you hurried to dreams A play of extended pretend A tear at reality’s seams Favorite renditions of frailties Mixed with freedom from earthly bonds Anything possible dreamt by babes With the reach to the greater beyonds A dream of flying offers to soar Through the clouds of ever release A dream of dying rocks to the core But may persuade souls to find peace Movies don’t wind as dreams will permit No projector can project so well. It's sad when a crux is to be bared There’s a ring of awakening bell? [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-25-2000).] |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I enjoy your serious side Walt. This is good. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Excellent piece dear Walt, I enjoyed this read very much  Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you miss devine your comments are always uplifting tracie you too yuh |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Walt, I do believe your precocious side is showing, and I like it... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Me too! Very nice, Walt! Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
sunshine is my cheerleader i apreciate her alot! denise thank you kindly! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Walt~ I am so enchanted with the poet in you. You are reaching deep into your talent - and coming up with polished gems. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
walt, this is wonderful. . . you've really grown with these my friend. . . becoming more of a craftsman everyday. . . --------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
I am new to all of this and would not realy even call myself a true poet yet. I'm afrade i did not full understand your work, but i would like it if u found the time to give me a discription of it |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
marge thanks you uplift me sven good to see you thank you much butterfly we have talked in email and it's so good to meet you thank you |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Great piece Walt ~ Ah were it only so! "Favorite renditions of frailties Mixed with freedom from earthly bonds Anything possible dreamt by babes With the reach to the greater beyonds" Beautiful!!! Bonnie |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
You know, you are far more diverse in your skill than you give yourself credit for. I like this thoughtful, well constructed poem, Walt. Excellent presentation and you leave your reader with a well crafted query. Dreams have long been the stuff of fine poetry. (and not so fine, but we won't go there...lol) Good writing. Rainy |
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Poertree Senior Member
since 1999-11-05
Posts 1359UK |
one playful one .. now one serious one, you diverse person you . nice thoughts here walt - i'm off to bed now to dreamthanks P |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
bonnie thank you so much rainy thanks for digging this up poertree you know when you are complimenting me that i just must agree with your wisdom yuh |
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