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for all our loves [Writen for Rosemary]
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for all our loves [Writen for Rosemary] |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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the salty fresh scent of my own rain lies bitter upon my tongue like a soft breeze your warm wind blew through my daz your eyes teased my face as I smiled back at them skipping about my spirit like the caress of a soothing whisper my weary being came to life again akin to clouds my soul sailed through our autumn skies smiling back at you coating your spirit too lifting a past from a cold soul & then sending love back again you are a special love you see & one day we shall both be free yet my candle dims it is dawn now & the morrow wakes me Memories for Sarah 4:20 am by Dale Wayne Gwaltney Copyright © 2000 Faith Island (All Rights Reserved) Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 11-24-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
i just love hubby and wifey duos yuh yuh i like your style lucky and i love your quote |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
lucky, I loved it. write on Kethry Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lucky--"The salty fresh scent of my own rain"...what a wonderful line that I wish I'd written...your thoughts this morning bring tears to my eyes, but not beautiful ones like yours. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Walt, I missed your 02:29 AM post. yuh, We always look for lovey dovey duos too. thanks for the compliments." Kethry thank you too..! and I love you quote also "Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Martie, Good morning I think. 11:40 yeah that's morning. Time to clean the kitchen. Wonder if the kids are up. I don't think so. they were wraping presents and putting them under the tree and admiring them till around 3:00 Am. Your so sweet, you bring tears to my eyes too and they could never be as beautiful as yours but I'll bet just as salty. What a nice projection. Love you Sis. |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Oh, sweetheart, thank you for writing of Sarah. Of writing of your own feelings for your losses, as well as mine. Of being one with me through so many of life's sorrows, so that your comfort is mine, and mine yours. I love this poem. It took me a while to know what to say, and to be able to see through the salt of my own, to type ... You, my husband, are a pearl of infinite value. I will tuck you gently within the smooth walls of my love forever. The spiritual wind that holds survivors aloft, plants the seeds from which bloom new hope ... R.J.G. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Lucky~ Such a loving gesture from your heart - for the lady of your heart. You are such a tender soul ... and don't think that it goes unnoticed. *Heart-Hugs* to you and Rosemary on this evening. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Rosemary J. Gwaltney You are my pearl, the greatest value I've known, thank you for writing and saying so. You know my feelings for all our losses. We are truely one even through so many of life's sorrows, my comfort is yours as yours is mine. I love your poetry... You, my Rosemary, are a pearl of infinite value. I will tuck you gently within the smooth walls of my love forever. Marge, Your heart is forever in my thoughts as well. You are so caring for so many critical issues that surely need to be addressed. I pray too your words will ring in the ears of the readers for years to come. Your one of the best my friend. Love and prayers coming your way. Love you All, dale [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 11-26-2000).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Awwwwwwww ! See - just ONE of the reasons we love you ! And believe me, dearest friend - there are many ! *Heart-Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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