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animal...to Lace....
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animal...to Lace.... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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This- is a tragedy no one seems to see. This, is but, travesty - no one else but me. I am alone in journey's thought not at home, not where I ought-- not the place I long to be not a trace of face of me... I, enraged, beat bars of cage-- an animal, in pace... love, ungauged, the futile rage, a thread, unwoven...LACE. [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 11-23-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
weave it! WEAVE IT! you always weave it well sen!! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Gosh that's so deep and filled with meaning but I can't figure it out...however, I loved it anyway....poetically a real gem...ethome I've got about three different ways I've gone with the meaning....oh you Louisiana girls are so filled with mystery.....ethome |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I am alone in journey's thought not at home, not where I ought-- not the place I long to be not a trace of face of me... I, enraged, beat bars of cage-- an animal, in pace... love, ungauged, the futile rage, a thread, unwoven...LACE. =================== someone once said a caged bird wont sing .. obviously ... they never read your poetry ... you are lace baby..and your pen weaves with spun gold... love you me |
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Poet deVine
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
I see you. And you are poet. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
S'en this is perfectly woven with the emotion that runs deep in your soul...and you open the bars and let if flow out like fine sweet wine...((hugs)) sweetie! You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
serenity, somehow I can see you as a cat, trapped... pacing. a beautiful sleek black panther.... unloved by society... well, really have no idea what the depths of this poem is about but... it sure sounds deep.  Parker |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
You again have done a beautiful job creating emotion with your words. Makes my day seem a little bit warmer...oh, wait...No, it's still 22 degrees. Brrrr! *grins* |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ you are amazing and this is powerful....loved this -SEA |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
serenity, this truly speaks. . . haunting my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
serenity, I can see you as both....animal and lace....an amazing combination.. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Walt...thank you kindly me friend. ethome..so it's mystery, huh? LOL...and you know what they say about "New Orleans Ladies..." smiles and thanks. Janet...I'm allowed to do whatever I want, as long as I don't leave the cage. sighs, hugs and winks. PdV....and I see YOU...and YOU are de Vine. Holly..that's kinda funny...lol...I thank you. See, I'm sort of accustomed to CLOSING the bars around here...rofl..winks and hugs. Parker..wow...that's a lovely image, and I may have to borrow that, if ya don't mind...THANK YOU Masked...THERE'S my buddy...and I'm sure I owe you an "e"...I get off track now and then..just ask anybody...thank you for reading...and I will write as soon as I quit writing ???? thank you! SEA...forgive me for this...but the Gatekeeper was reading over my shoulder and read your reply...lol..and I'm supposed to tell you that he thinks I'm amazing too...(so that's what that look is on his face!) ah ha ha ha...(feeling feisty again..lol) thank you! Sven...thank you, as always me friend, for your sweet and gracious reply! Michael...hmmm...thank you, as you continue to inspire me! winks, hugs and grins Thanks to all!!! |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
this poem I like muchly... |
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Masked Intruder
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Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
It certainly is your turn, you little grinch! *grins* I'd email ya, but I lost my function...hehe |
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