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Not Living |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC 
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"Not Living" shadows all around me on this dark night as my thoughts turn to you tears fall slowly down my cheeks let the pain go, nothing else i can do this isn't living me here and you there the pain is becoming to much the load too heavy to bare surrounded by family and friends yet my heart is so blue they all notice my fake smile thinking im happy, haven't a clue the pain inside my heart burns with an uncontrollable fire smile on my face heart says i'm a liar this isn't living me here and you there the pain is becoming to much the load too heavy to bare if the light could just find its way back into my heart and soul to feel you in my arms again would make me completely whole [This message has been edited by Aimster (edited 11-23-2000).] |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
encouragement to you. nice job in the poem too |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Amy, my friend. . . your pain shows in this one. . . it's hard right now I know. . . but it will be better. . . ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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OLIAS Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090Pearl city Iowa |
Aimster, Very touching poem, the person you miss is with you in your heart and your mind at this very moment, be well my friend. Take care, Olias. |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Amy, this one touches me deeply, I relate all too well to the feelings you have expressed! As Olias has said carry them in your heart, sometimes that is all we can do. The sun will shine for you, I know it! Take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Aim it's O'K hon, it's not for forever is it??? The sun will shine brighter than ever soon you'll see ~HUG~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Amy, I really do know how you feel love, it is one of the hardest lessons we have to learn. Truth to tell I'm lousy at waiting too. It will be all right in the end, but it feels a lifetime while you're waiting. Take care love, hold the dream in your heart and you and your love will be fine I promise. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
thank you all for your wonderful comments. me and the person im with haven't split up but 1000 miles apart can sure take a toll on a person. i am alright, just feeling blue these days. thanks all for the concern. take care. ~amy~ |
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raleighbttrfly Member
since 2000-11-21
Posts 160Raleigh NC |
I loved this pice of work. Im new here but i wanted to say that i undersand what you res feeling. That bite about absince macks the hart grow funder is hard to belive when u can"n hold the one u love. p.s. sorry i cant spelle better |
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Balladeer
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since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
You inject a lot of sadness into this one, Amy  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
amy-girl...this is sad but beautiful in its longing.. me thinks its time for a bus,plane, or train ride.. Vante'used to always tell me... "there is no distance between us... we are seperated only by the miles, we are always as one in heart, spirit and soul." But I do know nothnig takes the place of looking them in the eyes... stay strong sweetie love ya me There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'if the light could just find its way back into my heart and soul to feel you in my arms again would make me completely whole' Hey, Aim! This is so emotionally well written. Loved it!! ô¿ô -e I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
Amy, this is exquisite writing. Very emotional. Sad, but very well done.  Marina It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Amy...wish I could say I don't share this pain with you, but boy do I ever? Know that you are not alone ((hugs)), Jeff |
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