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One Wish Left |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) 
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I wish I had another wish Another and another For use of wish I must still wish Nary about my druthers I stop myself from wishing For a dog or for a cat Then my wishing would be done And what’s the use of that I’ve been steady in my keenness Not to wish for worldly goods Or that all this messy wishing I could wish you understood But I won’t! I won’t wish for nothing never I’ve accountants to keep my books Long as wishing stays in the black I won’t get no dirty looks I could wish the Dallas Cowboys Would win on Turkey Day But that would be the biggest wish No, a chearleader would do okay I could wish Supercalifradgi- Listicexpealidocious It’s moniker not ever be thought As something quite atrocious But I’ve only one wish left The first, I wished for you The second, a great big family With the third, I wish I knew! [This message has been edited by wayoutwalt (edited 11-24-2000).] |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
I am wishing I could rhyme as well as you. Your poem was great--from your pict I can see you're a wish come true. |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Walt........ I wish that all your wishes will come true!! Loved this, as I'm a dreamer and wisher at heart, too!! The best to you.........  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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pen of passion Member
since 1999-08-11
Posts 234 |
Oooooh, I forgot you dislike the word "greattttt!" I beg your forgiveness. Let me think... Lovely? No, not appropriate. Um, Original? Gosh, like you, I wish I knew. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This leaves charming smiles all around... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love it....and enjoyed it....  wish that your wishes come true.Charisma |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
I remember when I could spell Supercalifradgelisticexpealidocius backwards (my sisters and I were bored one day...hehe) I wish I could do that again!! Great poem, Walt!! Denise |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
thank you for all your well wishes!! |
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