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Angels song... haiku
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Angels song... haiku |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Heavens gem guide angels song Jesus Christ is born. |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Charisma...the message of this lent itself quite perfectly to the haiku form. Simple and awesome in its simplicity. Very well done, m'friend!!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you Serenity for your kind reply, don't know if I do this quite well, but I liked doing this. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very nicely done Charisma!! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is lovely, Charisma! Very nice! Denise |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
thank you ethome and Denise, for your lovely reply, it's always a pleasure to have your comments. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
*sigh* this is so softly beautiful. I could almost hear the angel wings fluttering. Thank you so much for the read. Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
My dear sweet friend you have penned one of sheer beauty in this one and not only is the presentation perfect in this but the subject matter and the feeling you leave behind with this one is one of joy and peaceful calm. Loved it much. Hugs to you my friend for being so special. |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Startime: thank you for your kind reply, and I am glad that you enjoyed it. Mark: thank you my friend, I always appreciate your comment heightly...and I'm very glad that you love this one. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i agree with Mark..it does leave one with a heartwarming fuzzy feeling... well done..so i presume we will now see more haiku/senryu from your pen?  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Kaile....thank you for your wonderful reply, and yeah I love doing haiku's/senryu's more and more...so I think that I will do this more often. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ this is absolutely PERFECT! Love this one!  -SEA |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, Excellent write. You did good, as a reward you can have the day off for your birthday. btw *HAPPY BIRTHDAY*Waddya mean it's tomorrow!Write on Keth < !signature--> Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed? Rex E. Alford [This message has been edited by Kethry (edited 11-27-2000).] |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is wonderful...and happy birthday wishes to you, too! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea: thank you for your lovely compliment, glad that you like this one.  Kethry: thank you for giving me a day off..I am off now, and will enjoy this day....thank you for your wonderful birthdaywishes . Sunshine: thank you, I am glad that you like it.....and thanks for your birthday wishes my friend. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Happy Birthday once again This is stunning...and will be printed for the holiday season to remind my family for the reason of the season...and not Play School and Fisher Price's Birthday!! The best and most beautiful things in the world cannot be seen or even touched ---- they must be felt with the heart~ *??* |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you Butterfly....and I am honoured that you want to print these one out. Play school and fisher Price's birthday are markable too for the young people...I can imagine that.. But can't win from the birth of our Savior, our lord. Charisma |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Have a wonderful birthday Charisma..and the haiku is one of the most beautiful i have read... ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Dennis L. White Senior Member
since 2000-02-17
Posts 1463Michigan, U.S.A. |
This is a sweet poem in Haiku form, put me in the Spirit! Nice job! B.T.W. Happy Birthday Charisma! Dennis :^) Moonbeams radiate When the veiling cloud has passed Playful shadows dance Dennis L. White :^) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Victoria: thank you and I am glad that you like it. Dennis: thank you for your kind reply, and I am glad that I could help a bit to put you in the spirit |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
You will find a Babe wrapped in swaddling cloths, lying in a manger...James |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
James: thank you...and yeah we will find a baby in a manger... Christmas is such a wonderful holliday..I love it. |
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