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Winter (my first haiku)
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Winter (my first haiku) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 WINTER snowfight change, I've hit you all SPLASH, with my snowball  [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 11-24-2000).] |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
weeeee...arent snowball fights fun!  very cute  hugs, dg "so lift your heart with mine...the depth to which it grieves is the height to which it can celebrate!" -Lisa Hussey |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
woohoo such fun |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Hi Charisma.... I love Haiku, and yours is wonderful, and you already know I love graphics!! Great job. Would you believe I'm up here in Alaska, and it's dry as a bone.....no snow!!  Write on! -<--<--{(@ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Excellent Charisma!! And I've got some snowballs that you can have! ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
DG: Yeah........they are fun Paula:  it is!Sunny: living in Alaska and no snow, what a shame, well telling you the truth, there is here no snow either.....I was hit by a virtual snowfight, and well this haiku was born. btw.... thank you for your visit on my homepage, Its still under construction, hope to work on it soon. Sven: thank you for your kind reply....and well throw the snowballs over... |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Cute!! Denise |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Nice poem!!!!!! |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you Denise and Vandana for stopping by and your reply. |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
This was great. Bravo!!!!I love snowball fights. Thank you so much for sharing.Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Startime: yeah snowbalfights are great.... |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
this brought a smile to my face no snow in the place i reside either...i empathise with you  |
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rosepetals25
since 2000-05-31
Posts 3076PA |
Charisma, I loooove haiku It is a cute fun little haiku.. but.. I hope the snow gods didn't hear you..lol. I do not want snow hehe. ~~Tara aka rp25 :o) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Kaile: I am glad that this one made you smile, and the winter just start, I truly hope that we will have a white Christmas..... Rosepetals: I am glad that you like the haiku, but I truly hope that there will be snow with the hollidays.... but well we wait and will see, maybe they will listen to you this year |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (giggles in delight) Hey, that was acheap shot, oooohhhhhh...you're going to be buried in snow now! LOL! (kiss on cheek) This wonderful senryu shows that you ahve always been the talented friend and poetess you are, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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