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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
Autumn Listen to the autumn birds. Extract the love from songs they sing Consisting of those silent words That sadness loves and beauty brings. And on silent silver wings Crave for beauty till it hurts. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
so much said...a beautiful craving... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
Beautiful.You say a lot with few words.Fine work. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
This brought back an event from last night. I'd gone out at 11:30 +-, to take out the trash. The sky had a strange glow, though dim, to it because it was totally overcast and reflecting our city's night lights, I guess. Anyway, somewhere above the clouds, unable to be seen, but so clearly heard, was a flock of geese. The sounds they made, the cry of the wild goose, was almost mournful of summer's passing and winter's coming. They really tugged at me, I wanted to just stand out there and listen. Thanks for bringing this recall and letting me relive the event. I think I may try to write a poem about it. I truly enjoyed this piece of yours. |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
I agree...so few words but sooo much said. This is great! Thanks for sharing!  Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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