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I heard your tender call..............
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I heard your tender call.............. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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I heard your tender call it resounded, silently, quietly, softly soulfully, skillfully, it sounded in my heart behind closed eyes I heard soft cry a mind meld of thoughts to impart I felt your tender call you were there, so long ago, a heartbeat away in keen memory your words still sway and dance the dance of night's long song wherein these dreams your thoughts belong did I dream your tender call behind the veil of night's sweet shadow soft holding tender, tender in the touch then wing me upward and hold me aloft the tender call is the voice of such I heard your tender call it sang soft, veritably soulfully sweet, and true as it came from the heart's heart of you and most delicately it came from behind the refrain that I would hear it again and again when you tenderly called my name Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ [This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-23-2000).] |
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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
Sunshine, Very gently expressed. Well done. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, purely, beautifully, softly and wonderfully well written. Excellant work love, really exqusite. Love this one, it has your signature beauty stamped across it. Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Sunshine, This was beautifully expressed and wonderfully done. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Gentle, lovely, finely woven! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Very lovely, Karilea! Denise |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sunshine very soft and gentle...James |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you all very much, as soft and gentle was the intent... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
intent shown. . . beautifully. . .  -------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This one has a beautiful flow to it Sunshine very nice romantic work well written...those verses are so well arranged and the meaning is impressed on the reader's mind....ethome |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Beautiful as always. Well done. It is always a joy to read your works. The White Wolf |
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Weave_Watcher Junior Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 21 |
Ilove to read poems of love Well done. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Sven, always...thank you... Ethome, always nice to see the romantics announce themselves...thank you... White Wolf, welcome again to my humble abode...thank you... Thank you Weave Watcher...Welcome to Passions... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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