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Promises to Myself
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Promises to Myself |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Promises to Myself do you do it too promise you to write the best as if a test by a judge to be cast in light of night's long write what does the judge know and do you do what I do best not pass the test but write because your heart sings through anything the cry of cries the loss of ties when you have tried to lift and fly and wonder where you must have been the mind wanders to wonders of when will you be the light of me the bright of me in a world that cannot see the love of two that came to be so many eons ago now only spirits met for love was kept safe in dream and fantasy a promise to myself Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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White Wolf Member
since 1999-09-18
Posts 371Somewhere in the vast wasteland |
Once again you have bidden the sun to rise and it has. A beautiful piece. Much like the first rays of light from the sunrise. The White Wolf |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, your promises are kept, because each and every time you exceed in beauty. This is again one where you have capped the stone. Brilliant as always. Take care Majestic Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
So glad to see you, White Wolf, and I so appreciate your kind words...they alone sing...thank you... Marsha...so many promises...so many sighs...thank you dear... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mattster Junior Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 29 |
"now only spirits met for love was kept safe in dream and fantasy" Brilliantly expressed. |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Thank you kindly, Mattster...I so like when folks pick out their favored part... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Tony Abbot Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209North Wales,UK |
I couldn't pick a favourite part,I loved the whole thing. 'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Tony, thank you...the whole piece likes me too... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
promises kept. . . thank you my friend. . .  ------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Quite welcome you are, Sven...always a pleasure to see you here... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow* ....wonderful promise. love the whole poem.... well done. Charisma |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Hey Charisma, nothing like being a day late and a dollar short, but full of Thanks for reading! |
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