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eyesplus2
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0 posted 2000-11-23 02:21 AM


Doe a dear, a female dear..........
You are my doe, and I'm your stag........

Ray a drop golden  sun......
The sun shines on me since you came into my life........

Me a name I call myself...............
Me and You a name I like to call even more...........

Far a long long way to go.................
We have journeyed far.........but we are so close.......

Sew a needle pulling thread...........
We are sewing are lives together............

La a note to follow so............
Forever to follow I love you........

Tea a drink with jam and bread.............
A white cake to follow I do...........

And that brings us back to Do...........
And that brings our lives to a new beginning........of you and I as one.......


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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
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1 posted 2000-11-23 08:42 AM


A scale woven into the lyrics of the
heart...so much imagination and beauty is
here...beautiful~


You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2000-11-23 09:05 AM


Oh, and guess which song goes with this...a b c d e f g...

now all day rhyming nurseries...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-11-23 03:56 PM


very nice idea!! enjoyed the read!
Saunni
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since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777
West Virginia
4 posted 2000-11-23 04:48 PM


This is so cool! Thanks for the read. I enjoyed it also.  

Sauni


Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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