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Sven
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0 posted 2000-11-22 11:39 PM


rising with the dawn
she greets the new day
welcomes the bright sun

opening her wings of love
she soars in the open sky
and we marvel at her song

soar high gentle one
we will watch and wait
to see thy love's wings

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-22 11:53 PM


And she is...Ms Melissa...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
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Kethry
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2 posted 2000-11-23 08:00 AM


Sven,
soaring here you are. Maybe you can entice Melissa back with your sweet pollen.
Write on
Kethry


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ethome
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3 posted 2000-11-23 03:54 PM


I have come in contact with Melissa's work here and she is a very gentle one....very well penned.......love's wings  yeah that's it.........ethome
Sven
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4 posted 2000-11-23 09:56 PM


Sunshine, indeed she is. . . thank you. . .

Kethry, perhaps I can. . . thakn you for reading. . .

ethome,  yes she is very gentle. . . and I have enjoyed her work greatly. . . thank you my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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5 posted 2000-11-24 12:52 PM


This is wonderful.  

You have a lot of people in this Gallery of yours don't you?

passion is life. . . ~Diana


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6 posted 2000-11-25 08:08 PM



Omigod this is so beautiful and to think that someone wrote something for me?!  Thank you so much, it touched my heart and a talented poet you are!  

Take care, my friend,
Melissa



The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams



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7 posted 2000-11-25 10:11 PM


Sven~
You've done this lovely poetess proud.
She flits in and out of my life in loving surround.
I love this, as I love her.
She's just a little angel I keep in my pocket !

*Just a little bit o'honeybee buzzing in to make my day !
Love ya', little Ms. Melissa !
~*Marge*~



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Sven
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8 posted 2000-11-25 11:48 PM


PV, yes I do. . . wonderful people and poets all. . . thank you. . .

Marge, we all should be so lucky to keep someone as wonderful as her in our pockets. . .    thank you my friend. . .

Melissa,  I am so glad that you liked this. . . you have touched myself and all of us here with your warmth and friendship. . . I wish you nothing but happiness in your life. . . and that you find the love you so wonderfully deserve. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Toerag
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9 posted 2000-11-25 11:56 PM


You should be ashamed of yourself! Writin' something like this! Poor guys like me trying to get just a little attention and you have to jump in and write something that makes sense, has meaning, and shows some forethought and intelligence.....Now where does that leave poor suckers like me?....Damn, some people have the nerve I'll tell ya!
kaile
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10 posted 2000-11-26 11:50 AM


lovely verse as always...like the others, i hope she comes back often to grace us with her poetry
Sven
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11 posted 2000-11-26 11:16 PM


Toerag. . . I'm sorry. . . I just couldn't help myself. . . she's just so darn nice and all. . . besides. . . we both know that I can't even begin to compete with a guy as smooth as you!!!  

kaile, thank you my friend. . . I hope that she comes back too. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


tracie66
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12 posted 2000-12-04 05:27 AM


Sven I'm in awe of all your words and these are no exception. A most wonderful tribute to  a sweet person  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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