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Saunni
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0 posted 2000-11-22 04:55 PM


One Walk

I need not know what another holds in their heart for me
For I live always on the light that only you can see
Oh, how it shines like the moonbeams that dance in the sky
I've one walk in life so let me spend it looking in your eyes...

Just our strength I will live with and on the rays of your love
Cause I only need your arms to hold me up
There's only one road I'll ever travel and it leads to your door
So, my one walk in this lifetime is what I've waited for...

A million prayers but one surely answered and now here you are
Fewer steps to my better days cause your light's never far
I believe in the man that made me see heaven once again
So, I'll spend my one walk in this lifetime being your kindest friend...

Allow my days to give you such sun for all time
And, on bended knee I'll give thanks that in this life you are mine
One walk we are given so we must always hold on tight
And, give thanks for the miles together each day and new night...


Allow my nights to give you such a wanted pleasant dream
This time let my light give you peace to all new things seen
I have just one wish that I may be forever by your side
So, I'm taking the chance and the walk before it passes me by...

Just one word holds the meaning for eternity at last
And, it's "us" in all ways from present to past
It's the wisdom to lead and the courage to need that's so true
I've got just one walk in life so let me walk it with you...

Saundra



Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

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SEA
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with you
1 posted 2000-11-22 05:16 PM


Saunni~ this is SO romantic!! I really enjoyed the soft sweet feel of this.   -SEA
catalinamoon
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2 posted 2000-11-22 05:54 PM


Beautifully penned. Happy love, what a great thing!
Sandra

Saunni
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3 posted 2000-11-22 07:38 PM


Thank you SEA and CAT...for responding.  

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

snowpants
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4 posted 2000-11-22 11:09 PM


'Just our strength I will live with and on the rays of your love
Cause I only need your arms to hold me up
There's only one road I'll ever travel and it leads to your door
So, my one walk in this lifetime is what I've waited for...'

This is absolutely beautiful, Saunni!  I can't believe this didn't get more responses!  So, BUMP!!  I love it!!
(maybe I'm feelin' romantic lately, but I love your signature quotation, btw)

sp  


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

wayoutwalt
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5 posted 2000-11-23 12:05 PM


wooo svelt simply svelt i think thats a word but yuh i love it
ethome
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6 posted 2000-11-23 04:20 PM


This is a very pretty and moving poem and I enjoyed the love and devotion very much.... ethome
serenity blaze
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7 posted 2000-11-23 05:32 PM


Saundra...I admire the quiet devotion and surety of this--a beautiful read...well written.
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