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vandana
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0 posted 2000-11-22 11:49 AM



Let's change the world,
let's change it forever,
let's change
for those who are ill,
Let's change for them
who doesn't have home to live in,
If you come to me,
Would you love me
when the world will be changing
In time,
Would you love me ,
let's change the world,
let's change the world forever,
Let's hold hands
And In time we can do It!!!!,
We are in love,
Noone,
No one will come between us,
If we change the world,
the world will be ours,
When we're one ,
Will be In love forever?,
If the world will change
Would you love me?
In time,
And time will find our hearts together,
Let's pray
and take a moment,
think of those who are on the streets,
And if we change the world
and make it better place to live in,,
We can give all the love
they need to get from us,
If we change the world,
Change the world!!!!!!
And thw world will be ours!!

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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada
1 posted 2000-11-22 11:55 AM


Wonderful message.  Nicely written.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-11-22 11:56 AM


All it takes is one person to start the change. Then each one add a new person and soon your work will be done. Good idea, I'll be glad to join you.
Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21
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In the winds of Cherokee song
3 posted 2000-11-22 12:15 PM


Sounds like the perfect place to start is in the heart of you my friend.  Lovely write and so well put.  I have a feeling that you along with all that you touch will forever be changed for the better.
compassion
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4 posted 2000-11-22 12:16 PM


Another lovely write from you. Each one, in our own way, daily changes some parts of this world, others' lives, individually and with hopes it is for the good for all, least ourselves.  
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
5 posted 2000-11-22 02:17 PM


Vandana I have been thinking along these same lines...each of us changes the world in some small way each day...some of us for good and some for bad...hopefully enough people will start thinking positively so we can make this world a better place...as you say spreading love from our hearts and helping those that live on the streets...James
Charisma
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lost in blue pages
6 posted 2000-11-22 02:23 PM


Vandana.....great message...and I agree with Inotb....wonderful idea.

keep up the great work

Charisma

vandana
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7 posted 2000-11-23 10:50 AM


Thank you everyone!!!!!!!!!
Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
8 posted 2000-11-23 11:12 AM


Vandana,
We can all change the world if we want. I am glad you brought out these feelings, well done.

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

vandana
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9 posted 2000-11-23 11:18 AM


Daniel DJ,Thank you!!!!!!!!
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