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Tell Me You Love Me
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Tell Me You Love Me |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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Tell me you love me even if it's a lie make love to me tonight morning is soon enough to say good-bye I'll pretend, this one last time that your heart hasn't cheated that your body hasn't committed a crime I'll forget those things to have this memory with you something beautiful to remember until I can hold someone new So tell me you love me even if it's a lie just don't look for tears I have none left to cry. ~SEA~ * this is NOT about me, all is good with me, this is just what came out of my pen this morning........  Live,Love,Laugh :) ~SueB |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
No disclaimer needed ever for the write of your pen.... I'm happy you are well Even happier to see what your pen wrote... poor pen...so sad... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Sea.....glad to know that you are ok... and this is a wonderful poem....love it... excellent write. Charisma |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Will this do?  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Circe, it may be sad but it's fantastic, and I love it, as always. Wonderful writing from you love, excellant work. Take care love Mushy Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely and touching poem. Nicely written. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Sunshine~ LOL!! You silly, my pen is fine, she's totally over it....  Charisma~ thank you Mark~ any love you send my way goes right to my heart and makes me smile, thank you! Marsha~ well Mushy heart, it is sad, but pure fiction sweetie! thank you PM~ cool, glad you liked! -SEA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
SEA, I like this Your 'fiction writing instrument' has weaved the feelings into words nicely... Coco |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
OK then...I LOVE YOU!! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
SEA, well that's a very different approach... just tell me sweet lies then do me.. wonderful write, sad, real, and hopeful... I won't lie to you.... I do love you. ok, what was the next part.  Parker |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~ thank you.... Ethome~ thanks for the smileParker~ Hey Handsome, the next part, as you put it, is to DO ME!! thanks baby for makin me grin like a fool -SEA |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Now I know why SEA means YES in Spanish! Huh? That's si? oh, well....you mean yes to me!!! |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Balladeer~ SEA means yes most of the time......sometimes SEA means maybe.......if you behave...... -SEA |
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Startime Member Ascendant
since 2000-10-03
Posts 5918Canada |
You have a talent for capturing the truth that rests in a heart cheated. Well done, I totally enjoyed the read. I am very glad it isn't about you too. Thank you so much for sharing.Love I leave with you my friend whether it be in your life or of yet the essense of your dreams. [URL=http://path2riches.com]http://path2riches.com |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwww, I'm so happy this feeling doesn't relate to you now, sweet friedn, this is sindeed a very heartaching write and my heart goes out to all who feel this ache! (kiss on cheek) This is very sensitive and touching, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Susan, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
wow! powerful write for not having felt it yourself... |
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