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Slashed soul
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since 2000-03-29
Posts 86
England

0 posted 2000-11-22 08:47 AM


Woman are kind, scared in a way
they assume about men 50% of the day
Men steal hearts and hurt them so
but this is the road that I dont know
Never gone and never will, make a promise I can't fulfill.

So trash my love, so big and blind
tell me I'm so loving, wonderful and kind,
don't give me the chance to say "woman I love you in my own way"
Disregard my thoughts and tender touch
Falsify the love we built so much
Throw away your lovers mind
and look hard for i'm hard to find

Never look back always in ahead,
for once hurt, my love is dead
no chances for the future- no love kept on ice.
damaged heart, crushed in your vise.

Rich

-ah-ha, ;0)


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serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

1 posted 2000-11-22 09:11 AM


bit rusty?  little oil will fix ya right up...lol..nice to see you back...(now turn around, and let's see yer front) LOL...

sorry, couldn't resist... the poem, btw, was a nicely penned perspective....

[This message has been edited by serenity (edited 11-22-2000).]

Celeste
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since 2000-11-11
Posts 597

2 posted 2000-11-22 09:19 AM


Aye........sometimes very true.   I found myself contemplating this for quite awhile after I read it.  Which means it will of course land in my favorites     Nice to meet you and thank you for sharing!

To capture and live a moment is truly living

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