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My Proud |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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My Proud The mountain rises and falls, large boulders dot the road and break in dots across the path, the roots of the Manzanita cling to the air, their coppery branches reaching, oak trees climb the ridge and below, the river is so clear you can see gold shimmer like dust under its riffle. My grown up child of green magic eyes, the one I twirled round the room with singing, "just like me, they long to be, close to you" and he just laughed, his blond head thrown back, watching the ceiling spin until the tumble of his energy took him folded on the couch. He, now so handsome and so sure in his new sleek black car taking the corners of view up into and over the top of dizzy ‘til we sweep the valley from the window and see the silver ocean slanting across the horizon Love is so boundless in this becoming that he is, and I so warm to think from my smile he took his lips and he curved them into gentleness that becomes him, for my proud circles around him and I know he must feel this treasure that his becoming gave to me. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
This is pure gold in great green eyes... and I thank you for it! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
you never cease to amaze me with your abilities my friend... wonderful poetry. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Martie~ What loving thoughts from the ink of a mother. Forever are those moments etched in timeless joy. This is wonderful and you continue to be ... *Heart-Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
My grown up child of green magic eyes, the one I twirled round the room with singing, "just like me, they long to be, close to you" and he just laughed, his blond head thrown back, watching the ceiling spin until the tumble of his energy took him folded on the couch. ====================== Love is so boundless in this becoming that he is, and I so warm to think from my smile he took his lips and he curved them into gentleness that becomes him, for my proud circles around him and I know he must feel this treasure that his becoming gave to me. ======================== motherly love and pride becomes you ... and him ... and this very special poem. wonderful tribute sweet poet ... seeing him thru your eyes...yes his becoming is a beautiful thing to behold love ya me |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--Thank you for such sunshine words. Mike--Hi, so glad that you stopped by. Marge--Heart hugs back, my friend. Janet--Love to you too! |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Martie, Excellent, I do so enjoy your writing. Sy |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
A lovely tribute from a Mother to her Son. . . Wonderful my friend. . .  ------------------------------------------------------ That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Would you be wantin to adopt an Irish cowboy my friend? This is a lovely piece from your heart but knowing the beauty of your heart and soul, I would have expected nothing less. No wonder I love your works and you at the same time my sweet dear friend. |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Hi Sy...thanks so much for letting me know you like my poetry...I like yours too. Sven--thanks for your kind words. Mark--I would love to adopt you (and your horse too)...You are so sweet with your words...how could anyone resist ...hugs to you! |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Your way with words always amazes and pleases me so much - I run out of words trying to tell you - could 'feel' you justifiable pride and love in every phrase |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Oh Martie ... your pride and heart-warming devotion shines so brilliantly through these endearing images you painted so beautifully. Very lovely indeed! Best wishes, /Kit |
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