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Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989


0 posted 2000-11-21 07:06 PM




I remember the first time that we met.
It's a day that I will never forget.
I was waitressing past him in the aisle.
He looked at me and melted my heart with his smile.
He came back another time or two,
and suprised me when he asked
"Can I have a date with you?"
Of course my heart jumped with delight!
Oh he was such a handsome sight...
Later, after a date, or two,
he asked me "Can I make love to you?"
I smiled and said "yes",
as I trembled and shook.
There in the back seat my virginity he took.
Then in silence he drove me home...
he said "I'll see ya sometime"...
and I never felt so all alone.


On the wings of words our spirits fly, and our souls are free.



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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-11-21 07:26 PM


Oh oh you gave in too easy ......but I'm heading to the second part to see how you're going to handle this....see ya there.......
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
2 posted 2000-11-22 02:13 PM


I'm with Ethome on this one.  On my way to part 2 now to see where this ended up.  
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