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Yearnings of a Heart
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Yearnings of a Heart |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
 Yearnings of A Heart In dark of night shadowed spirit rests Upon sheets of satin in eyelet dress Drifting through passages of timeless sleep Where passionate heart so quietly weeps Of endless dreams of once upon times Yearnings of a heart to be truly loved Arising at dawn to amber glow of sun Dreams are forgot new journeys have begun Through golden archway where trust is found Demons and dragons have all been cast out A touch of man with gentle hand Releases from cage a spirit no longer contained Two hearts unite forming sacred bond Together in rhythm till end of all time... Coco [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 11-22-2000).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Coco, A very warm and tender rendering, I enjoyed the read. |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Coco, this is beautiful ...enchanting in its mystical imagery and romantic emotions. had a dreamy essence to it .. wonderful poetry..truly take care jm There are moments ... when I Love you beyond the limits of my human heart ... ...you will always be mine. Collin Raye |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful my friend. . . simply wonderful. . .  ----------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Coco~ Janet used all the words that came to my mind too, so I will simply echo her, this is wonderful! -SEA |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Seymour, my thanks for your kindness in reply and taking a peak at this lil rhyme Janet & Sea, you 2 sweeties got me smiling and I'm sure ya know I so much adore the "mystical" and "innocence" in dreamed up rhyme Hmmm me thinks I need a coffee it's wakeup time  Sven, that reply coming from you I take to heart thank you Poetfriend |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Dani~ This is just the loveliest rhyme. Thoughts as pretty as these must have come from just the nicest of 'once-upon-a-times'. It's not exactly wake-up time here ... but I think I'll join you in that cup of coffee. *Hugs* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this very much...James |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Coco my friend, what a wonderfully beautiful piece to be treated to. I knew that you had to have one in here somewhere and I am glad that I found it. Your writing is growing with each new post you make. Loved this one bunches. |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
oman coco so cool yuh love it coco baci coco baci groove |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Coco *sigh* truly a lovely poem....penned with grace and desire....love it. Charisma |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Coco, this is superb. Very magical. Sandra |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
This is as lovely and romantic, Coco..I very much enjoyed! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Such tender romantic thoughts...and the imagery was breath taking...so beautiful Coco~ You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~ |
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