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No Fishing Allowed |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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last one for a while..off to vegas for Thanksgiving ..wish me luck ha Happy Thanksgiving everyone... the title originally said NO FISHING ALOUD but i guess you can fish quietly  Please stop pitching your tent in the campgrounds of my heart you wade through my bloodstream baiting with memories trying to hook me only to tease me and throw me back in again spinning, luring memories through my mind casting your sweet kisses im not falling hook, line, and sinker anymore only for you to fry me in the campgrounds of my heart you know there are plenty of fish in the sea.. so why do you keep casting your memories to me A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-21-2000).] |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Maybe he realizes that once you have caught the prize fish, then the rest don't measure up. Sounds as if maybe you need to steal his bait and leave him with an empty hook to me. Nice write my friend. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
thank you Mark..im gonna stock his pond with piranha..ha...Have a nice holiday cowboy..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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SwEeTnSeXy18 Member
since 2000-09-18
Posts 247nc |
Victoria Im sorry this guy in the poem has been leading you along and then dropping you like a hot potato. Noone deserves to feel that way and i dont blame you for not falling for his bait anymore. Good Luck! Take care, Lisa ~in order to gain, you have to lose~ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
actually...he wanted to hook all the other fish too..haa..and i guess they are still taking the bait ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Why do you keep biting cute little fishie?? |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
you wade through my bloodstream baiting with memories trying to hook me only to tease me and throw me back in again im not falling hook, line, and sinker anymore only for you to fry me in the campgrounds of my heart you know there are plenty of fish in the sea.. so why do you keep casting your memories to me ... I don't know how I missed this one, guess I was preparing for my trip to be with you ...this was so true ~V~ and does make me smile and frown ... ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
glad that wynter catch this one back...so I had the opportunity to read this one too. think that many can relate on this one. wonderful done. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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