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madlion
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since 2000-11-20
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boca raton

0 posted 2000-11-21 03:55 PM


The touch of someone
But not just anyone
But someone special to me
Close to me
Someone I'm in need of
She has the love
That I'm in need of
Why can't it all be so simple
Damn, she left me emotionally crippled!

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ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2000-11-21 04:12 PM


Nothing ever seems to be completely simple when it comes to love...that's why the wonderful challange of it is so exciting.. love another four letter word....good expressions I enjoyed the idea very much!!
..............ethome.....

kaile
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Member Ascendant
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146
singapore
2 posted 2000-11-26 12:25 PM


i enjoyed the short intense read and i liked your conclusion a lot...thanx for the read
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
3 posted 2000-11-26 02:33 PM


madilon,
I tend to agree with ethome 'love' another four letter word. Great write.
be well
Kethry


Why do yesterdays remain and todays pass by ...unnoticed?
Rex E. Alford

madlion
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boca raton
4 posted 2000-11-26 02:47 PM


thank you all for taking the time to read my writing .....madlion
madlion
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since 2000-11-20
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boca raton
5 posted 2000-11-26 02:47 PM


thank you all for taking the time to read my writing .....madlion
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