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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 2000-11-21 03:03 PM


My Antiworld

Ghostly fingers play invisible strings
Yet I dance to the music that it rings.
No substance, wind or air just thoughts of dare
All driving me to the frolic of flare.

It is spooned in dream with a pinch of a seem
Totally mixed with the blade of a scheme.
And a curtains drawn on a stage of act
That plays the spotlight to become a fact.

Nothing to something in the wink of an eye
Fantasy caught in a net on the fly.
And the heart goes thump bumpity bump
And your throat forms a clump and a lump.

It's a tune I hear with my middle ear
A little Cheshire but very sincere.
I dance invisibly to ghostly rings
Without the aid of physical things.

To me it is a world in a world
To you it might be an antiworld.



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Sunshine
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1 posted 2000-11-21 03:05 PM


what a netherworld of sight and sound
simply plays me all around
let me live another day
so I might see what Sy will say...

you know this loves me....{~,^}


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




ethome
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2 posted 2000-11-21 03:09 PM


Well I don't think I'm going to call it anything other than simply great poetry!!
Seymour Tabin
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3 posted 2000-11-21 04:16 PM


Sunshine,
Love you too.

Ethome,
Thank you for the simply great.

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2000-11-21 04:34 PM


Ghostly fingers play invisible strings
Yet I dance to the music that it rings.
No substance, wind or air just thoughts of dare
All driving me to the frolic of flare.

It is spooned in dream with a pinch of a seem
Totally mixed with the blade of a scheme.
And a curtains drawn on a stage of act
That plays the spotlight to become a fact.

====================
It's a tune I hear with my middle ear
A little Cheshire but very sincere.
I dance invisibly to ghostly rings
Without the aid of physical things.

To me it is a world in a world
To you it might be an antiworld.
===========
take me to your leader  
strumming my bain with your rhyme ...so divine
now I have a matched set of cool to add to my treasure chest today,
thank you
*winkiewinkie*
later-out of this world-gator
jm


Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
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Tamarac Fla
5 posted 2000-11-21 06:51 PM


JM,
Nothing like a match set of COOL. Winkiewinkie. Sy

Balladeer
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6 posted 2000-11-21 08:25 PM


Don't worry, Sy. It doesn't really anti-matter  


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