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When You Came Along Undercover
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When You Came Along Undercover |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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When You Came Along Undercover In the dark of night, yet in moonfilled sky stars glisten the moist of the air. Words trickle down, touching in warmth undercover, of comfort, now bare. They kiss tenderly, moving gently in touch rising the passion that heats. Satin, the feel, in the blue of the night two weaving 'gainst silken of sheets. When you came along, masked in unknown each time, I noticed a feel. Familiar to me, you seemed tenderly a dream in the making, come real. Do you know what it does, to my heart when you're near Do my eyes show, by flirting your blues? Do you wonder the whys or the hows came to be That my thoughts are arrested by you? No mistaken the tracing of edges on edge, Nor the tallness, against which I lean. And the softness of kiss, as lips caress lips I envision each night in mind's screen. Undercover of you, undercover with me Soon before year ends in one. A memory that thirsts, for the moment of firsts to savor, as each day is done. ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I can't stand to see any one with a 0 beside their name...well, I'm glad I dropped in on this romantic gem of poetry...beautiful thoughts of intensely growing love and devotion "Familiar to me, you seemed tenderly a dream in the making, come real." Good stuff!! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nice rhythm NT..lovely poem as always...  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
E..I do the same thing, it's bad enough to be lonely and write of it but to have no responses even if read..well I will spend the whole time if I have to responding to the empty ones...thank you, it is appreciated greatly ~Wynter huggzz "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Hey ~V~ thanks, "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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