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OLIAS
Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa

0 posted 2000-11-21 01:12 PM


For Judy, who makes every day precious.

Unity.

We have no time for sorrow,
Between us, you and I,
No tireless soul searching,
No reason to ask why,
We fit together hand in glove,
A telepathic "know",
That mutual exceptance,
Just moves us with the flow,
We count our blessings one by one,
And thank our lucky stars,
There is no greater happiness,
No deeper love than ours,
No need for insecurities,
In strength we stand together,
No grain of doubt, in circumstance,
We live, in love, forever.


© Copyright 2000 Mick Yates - All Rights Reserved
Tony Abbot
Member
since 2000-11-18
Posts 209
North Wales,UK
1 posted 2000-11-21 01:19 PM


Lovely poem.Judy will love it as well,I'm sure.

'Humankind cannot bear too much reality' T.S.Eliot

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2000-11-21 01:20 PM


Hey Olias this is a beautiful poem of love and devotion and you are a real lucky guy to have someone so dear to you to share your heart with...ethome
Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666
California
3 posted 2000-11-21 01:22 PM


Splendid work, Olias.  I thoroughly enjoyed this piece.


Michael

Shelby Olivia
Junior Member
since 2000-07-04
Posts 25

4 posted 2000-11-21 05:06 PM


OLIAS,
Judy is a very, very lucky girl. Thank you!

DreamSeeker
Member
since 2000-11-17
Posts 72

5 posted 2000-11-21 05:13 PM


"Sound out the galleons..."

In That QuietKnowing
Unspoken Trust
ForbearanceTenderTouch
You Define Love
In The Giving

"Appointed close factors..."

OLIAS
Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
6 posted 2000-11-21 08:37 PM


T.A. Thanks for your response I hope she likes it.  

ETHOME Your words are very kind and I feel very lucky every day. Thank you.

MICHAEL I'm glad you liked it, its from my heart and means so much.

SHELBY OLIVIA I'm a very very lucky man  
Thanks for your response

DREAMSEEKER You speak more truth in seven lines than I in four score. Thanks for your response.


Regards and thank you too everyone
Olias

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738

7 posted 2000-11-22 09:59 PM


OLIAS....this left me downright envious...a beautiful portrayal of perfect trust...well done, m'friend.
Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
8 posted 2000-11-22 10:04 PM


Eloquent, honest, beautiful and simply
put...stunning.  Your love shows in ever
line and the fact that not only do you have
a love and recognize it but you cherish it
enough to weave it into poetry...beautiful
work Olias~


You cannot dance in the sun until you have cried in the rain~

OLIAS
Senior Member
since 2000-06-20
Posts 1090
Pearl city Iowa
9 posted 2000-11-23 07:54 AM


Serenity,
They say there is someone for everyone, I had to travel 5ooo miles to find the love of my life, but now I have I'm not ever going to lose her. Thank you for your kind response.

Butterflies,
Thank you for your response, I'm overwhelmed by your words, and I'm happy you enjoyed it.
I can't imagine my life without Judy.

Regards to you both and take care, poet friends,
Olias.

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