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LilPeanut
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since 2000-11-21
Posts 26
Pennsylvania, USA

0 posted 2000-11-21 10:27 AM


Gazing off into the distance,
Where water meets the land.
Tears stream from my face,
As you've come to take my hand.

These plans God made,
At last, come true.
Our lives joined as one,
For fate has sought through.

These tests of time,
So hard to achieve,
We've overstepped them,
With the greatest of ease.

Our souls once lost,
Have now been found.
With faith by our side,
Our love, so profound.

In each others arms,
As destiny had planned.
This journey sets sail,
For our new found land.

© Copyright 2000 Kelly Allison - All Rights Reserved
SEA
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1 posted 2000-11-21 10:37 AM


LilPeanut~   I like this very much   -SEA
dragonpoe
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since 2000-11-12
Posts 608
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2 posted 2000-11-21 11:19 AM


Sweet and lovely.
Enjoyed it  

With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free..
dragonpoe

LilPeanut
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since 2000-11-21
Posts 26
Pennsylvania, USA
3 posted 2000-11-25 08:31 AM


SEA,
  Thank you so much for your thoughtfulness.
May you have a beautiful week.

Dragon,
Thank you so much, I am glad you liked it. Have a wondeful week.

Take Care!

Kelly

SwEeTnSeXy18
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 247
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4 posted 2000-11-28 09:10 PM


Lilpeanut

I thought this poem was simple and sweet yet very heat-felt. Im glad the Journey was a sucess. Good luck in the future with your love. It makes me happy to feel love in the world.   Take care, Lisa


~in order to gain, you have to lose~



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